15.\u00a0 I have had alot of climax in my book , my first climax was in chapter six when Maisie\u00a0( the main charachter) just came back from her moms that lives nine hours away and she\u00a0has been there for a year and she has not seen her best boys friends in awhile.\u00a0 when she comes back the boys are kind of like boys, because\u00a0before Maisie left they were not really boys because they did not like girls and they\u00a0were into video games, but now\u00a0one of the boys has a girl friend and they dont really like video games they like to do sports and ect.\u00a0 I\u00a0think this part was a climax because \u00a0Maisie and the guys have changed and they think diffrently then before. Then in chapter eleven it got good again because Maisie was starting to just hang with shakes and kevin and Chris were starting to get jealous and Maisie and Chris where falling in love, and Kevin and Chris were making up plans to split them up.\u00a0Then in chapter thirteen it got very climaxy because Maisie was sitting in the back of the bus with shakes and ( Maisie was in grade nine and the grade tens were not there so Kevin and Chris sat write infront.) On that bus ride Maisie got assaulted by Kevin, Chris and shakes. Then it got climaxed again on chapter fifteen because everybody knows what happened on he back of the bus but somebody told it a different\u00a0way. Finally it got really to a climax because Maisies step mom found out and her dad and now they are sueing the school.<\/p>\n
16. What I think the author could of done to make\u00a0the story\u00a0better is maybe to let Maisies Friends tell the story to because in the story it just says Maisies opinion but maybe Shakes has a different\u00a0opinion on what happened and what was going through his head at the time and maybe Shakes had no choice. I wish I could hear Shakes opinion and Kevins and Chrises and what they were all thinking from the beggining and the end.<\/p>\n
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