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15.  I have had alot of climax in my book , my first climax was in chapter six when Maisie ( the main charachter) just came back from her moms that lives nine hours away and she has been there for a year and she has not seen her best boys friends in awhile.  when she comes back the boys are kind of like boys, because before Maisie left they were not really boys because they did not like girls and they were into video games, but now one of the boys has a girl friend and they dont really like video games they like to do sports and ect.  I think this part was a climax because  Maisie and the guys have changed and they think diffrently then before. Then in chapter eleven it got good again because Maisie was starting to just hang with shakes and kevin and Chris were starting to get jealous and Maisie and Chris where falling in love, and Kevin and Chris were making up plans to split them up. Then in chapter thirteen it got very climaxy because Maisie was sitting in the back of the bus with shakes and ( Maisie was in grade nine and the grade tens were not there so Kevin and Chris sat write infront.) On that bus ride Maisie got assaulted by Kevin, Chris and shakes. Then it got climaxed again on chapter fifteen because everybody knows what happened on he back of the bus but somebody told it a different way. Finally it got really to a climax because Maisies step mom found out and her dad and now they are sueing the school.

16. What I think the author could of done to make the story better is maybe to let Maisies Friends tell the story to because in the story it just says Maisies opinion but maybe Shakes has a different opinion on what happened and what was going through his head at the time and maybe Shakes had no choice. I wish I could hear Shakes opinion and Kevins and Chrises and what they were all thinking from the beggining and the end.