Q 4: In my book, one of the stories i just read out of it (because it changes stories every 40 or so pages) was the boogyman! this one was the best one so far! it was suspencful and i loved it but at the end it surprised me that…dring the whole ‘story’ it was a guy talking to a lady about what happend to his kids and he was talking about how his 3 kids died..the boogyman. The part that surprised me was at the end he walked into the room and he heard something saying…’so nice..so nice…’ and it was the boogyman holding a mask..-the mask of the girl he had been talking to about how the boogyman killed his kids…so he was pretty much telling the boogyman how creepy and his story.
Q 9: The language he uses in my book is……he makes the characters say a lot of harder words, and he writes them to sware, a bit throughout the stories. He may do this because it attracts more and makes it more interesting, and for swaring it could be because its funny
Q 15: I think im at the climax now, because the stories in my book are getting more interesting. The stories started geting interesting at night surf then it went to boogyman and that one was my favourite, now its grey matter and its now too bad! Night surf was some people at a beach, they were kind of alone in the world because everyone was getting sick and dying. Boogyman, like i said in number 4, was a guy telling a girl about the death of his 3 children but the lady was in disguise, hiding under the mask was the boogyman! now grey matter…im not too sure about thisone…all i really remember is a few guys and one day one of them layed down with a blanket and he looked at his hand and it was grey..some sort of grey matter!
Nice post Sierra 🙂