1. i didn’t like how cal wouldn’t like how cal is is not going home because he supposedly hurt his little sister even know he didn’t. but the good thing know he is trying to get back to his house but there is alot of cops around so he cant get home. he didn’t hurt them.
2. the things that puzzled me in the book is that how he would hurt his family why would he do that. I think that the people who kidnapped him told his little sister that his name is cal so when he was hurting her she screamed out cal so rafe heard that and thought it was actually cal.
5. there was a picture that his dad drew and it was a waiter with an ace and a jack i thought in my head that is 21 what must be something special something that i still don’t know about it might have to do with the 21 of the month a house number or something.
The book souns good, just have some punctuation mistakes
The book sounds good like it keeps you guessing. How was it overall?
it is good i always want to read more. because he always is getting kipnapped and stuff so i want to know what happens next.
your welcome for the book its good isn’t it 😀
ha thanks it is a good book
and ya u did have some punctuation mistakes. 😛
Yeah just a couple punctuation mistakes and i think you might have repeated something in the first sentance. But overall good post your book sounds good. When i sat with you i noticed you were always into the book